I like the progression. But as in several of your other projects, I think the melody should develop, not change sound and direction. The arpeggios are good, and it does flow well. Think more about melody.
I would like to thank you for your feedback on my post. I have received my report card today and it stated that for my term 4 grade I got an Incomplete. This has me confused because I have finished my two projects, I may not like them but I did complete them. Would you please clarify why I received the grade I did. Thank you for your cooperation.
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I like the progression. But as in several of your other projects, I think the melody should develop, not change sound and direction. The arpeggios are good, and it does flow well. Think more about melody.
I would like to thank you for your feedback on my post. I have received my report card today and it stated that for my term 4 grade I got an Incomplete. This has me confused because I have finished my two projects, I may not like them but I did complete them. Would you please clarify why I received the grade I did. Thank you for your cooperation.
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