First Project

I got got the idea for the first part while on a road trip and I notice the cracks on the road and came up with the kick drum beat for this. I went from there with whatever sounded good. The second part I used a more easy sound. The fill I got from, and some of you may hate me for referring to it, rock band. Whenever i needed to do a fill I would use what you here now. I'm hoping to improve my technique but the only way I can do that is from your comments. Tell me what you do and do not like and offer suggestions.

What am I Doing?

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